Flow in Figma: https://www.figma.com/file/dkDQHRa1zq7tU58MiL6hBR/SaFi---UI---MVP-(Shared)?node-id=8947%3A54550
Initial copy | Updated copy - Formal (Vacuumlabs) | Approved copy - Formal | Updated copy - Informal | Tagalog - Formal | Tagalog - Informal | Notes | |
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1 | -Drawer menu- | ||||||
2 | Your value plan | Your value plan | Your value plan | [RB] Order of the menu items will be changed | |||
3 | -Plan overview- | ||||||
4 | Your value plan | Your value plan | Your value plan | ||||
5 | Smart Plan | Smart Plan | Smart Plan | ||||
6 | Value Plan summary | Value plan summary | Value plan summary | ||||
7 | Plan | Plan | Plan | ||||
8 | Status | Status | Status | ||||
9 | Since | Since | Since | ||||
10 | Next autodebit date | Next payment | Next payment | ||||
11 | Subscription fee | Subscription fee | Subscription fee | ||||
12 | Benefits plan | Plan includes | Plan includes | ||||
13 | Free ATM withdrawal | Free ATM withdrawal | Free ATM withdrawal | ||||
14 | Free cash-in | Free cash-in | Free cash-in | ||||
15 | Free debit card | Free personalized debit card | Free personalized debit card | [PM] Please remove 2/2 since this is a free physical card across all | |||
16 | On average you save ₱181.00 monthly compared the value of similar products based on standard market conditions. | On average, you save ₱181.00 monthly compared to the value of similar products based on standard market conditions. | Save about ₱181.00 compared to similar products. | [PM] is the value/amount here dynamic? | |||
17 | Change plan | Change plan | Change plan | ||||
18 | Waive the fee | Waive the fee | Waive the fee | ||||
19 | -Plan overview- | ||||||
20 | (see rows 4-12) | ||||||
21 | Free transfer or bill payments | Free transfer or bill payments | Free transfer or bill payments | ||||
22 | Free top-up (mobile & gaming) | Free mobile and gaming top-up | Free mobile and gaming top-up | ||||
23 | Free domestic remittance | Free local remittance | Free local remittance | ||||
24 | On average you save ₱571.00 monthly compared the value of similar products based on standard market conditions. | On average, you save ₱571.00 monthly compared to the value of similar products based on standard market conditions. | Save about ₱571.00 compared to similar products. | ||||
25 | (see rows 17-18) | ||||||
26 | -Plan overview- | All-star | All-star | ||||
27 | (see rows 4-12) | ||||||
28 | (see rows 21-23) | ||||||
29 | On average you save ₱1,141.00 monthly compared the value of similar products based on standard market conditions. | On average, you save ₱1,141.00 monthly compared to the value of similar products based on standard market conditions. | Save about ₱1,141.00 compared to similar products. | ||||
30 | -Upgrade plan from Smart to Growth- | ||||||
31 | Change Value Plan | Change value plan | Change value plan | ||||
32 | My Plan | My plan | My plan | ||||
33 | Smart | Smart | Smart | ||||
34 | ₱199/month | ₱199/month | ₱199/month | ||||
35 | On average you save ₱571.00 compared | On average, you save ₱571.00 monthly compared to the value of similar products based on standard market conditions. | Save about ₱571.00 compared to similar products. | ||||
36 | Plan inclusions | Plan inclusions | Plan inclusions | ||||
37 | 7x free ATM withdrawals | 7x Free ATM withdrawals | 7x Free ATM withdrawals | ||||
38 | The upgraded plan will be available for you immediately after the purchase | Your upgraded plan will be available immediately after your purchase | Your upgraded plan will be ready for you right away! | ||||
39 | Upgrade to Growth | Upgrade to Growth | Upgrade to Growth | ||||
40 | -Downgrade plan from Smart to Growth- | ||||||
41 | (see rows 31-37) | ||||||
42 | The new plan will be available for you from the next cycle starting 15 Aug 2022. | Your new plan will be available for you on the next cycle starting 15 Aug 2022. | Hang tight! Your new plan will be ready for you on the next cycle starting 15 Aug 2022. | ||||
43 | Change to Growth | Change to Growth | Change to Growth | ||||
44 | -Benefits used promote upgrade- | ||||||
45 | (see previous rows for repeating ux copy) | ||||||
46 | Upgrade | Upgrade | Upgrade | ||||
47 | You have used all of the benefits | You have used up all of the benefits | Looks like you've used all of your benefits on your current plan. Want more? Our other plans may be a better fit for you. :) | ||||
48 | Upgrade to Growth | Upgrade to Growth | Upgrade to Growth | ||||
49 | -Inactive status- | ||||||
50 | (see previous rows for repeating ux copy) | ||||||
51 | Status | Status | Status | ||||
52 | Activate plan | Activate plan | Activate plan | ||||
53 | Compare plans | Compare plans | Compare plans | ||||
54 | -Compare plans- | ||||||
55 | (same as in onboarding screens) | ||||||
56 | -Waive fee- | ||||||
57 | (see previous rows for repeating ux copy) | ||||||
58 | Waive the fee | Waive the fee | Waive the fee | ||||
59 | In case you are not content with our services, you can waive the fee - you will get back money from the fee paid for this cycle. | In case you are not content with our services, you can opt to waive the fee. You will get back the fee paid for this cycle and you will be contacted by our Customer Care team. Do you want to proceed? | If you feel like our services aren't for you, you can waive the fee and you'll get back what you paid for this cycle. After that, our Customer Care team will reach out to you. Do you want to proceed? | ||||
60 | Cancel | Cancel | Cancel | ||||
61 | Waive the fee | Waive the fee | Waive the fee |